Wednesday, October 23, 2013

The Old House

In this old house on the mountain, there lived an old lady. She was nice and sweet, looked like 90 years old. But no body knew that she is already dead for 101 years! One night, a group of  children went to camping on the mountain. The mountain was high and big. The children were lost. They were tired. Some younger children cried. They saw the old lady house, and ran in it. The door slammed by itself! Then the light turned on. They saw the old lady smiling at them. She said, "Hello! My name is Cindy. Are you tired? You can sleep in my room!"Her voice was croaky. They said thank you to Cindy, and went to bed. Next day, when they woke up, they saw that some of them were gone! They were scared, but nobody knew that is Cindy killed them. When they finished the breakfast, They went to play in the garden. And one little boy fell down. They came to see, and found the children bodies. They screamed,"Ahhhh!" They ran into the forest. And no one saw the old house and the children again!


1 comment:

  1. I think your story is scary.and I really like the grand mom part but I think the grand mom should have buried them in the ground. Nice job!!!!!!!!!

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