One day,when I went home, I go in the attic to find some book to read . Under the red box, I found a black book, I take it up ,its heavy and old. I take it on the table and open it. Then I hear the sound, it tells me to step on it. I did it, when I open my eyes, I'm on the beach! The water is clean, the sand is soft and white and the back on the island is a forest. I'm scared. I run in the forest, there is many tall trees. Then one tiger runs to me! The tiger is big, When I want to run away, I found the book on the floor, I quickly stepped on it. I'm in the attic! I feel happy, the tiger almost eat me! I put away the book and never read it again.
Coco,
ReplyDeleteI LOVED your story. I'm relieved that you got to stay alive when the tiger was chasing after you. Real amazing story though, you did a great job!
:D Selina Wu
Fantastic work with your adjectives! I like how you tried to paint a picture of the beach and the tiger in our heads. You made it feel like we were actually there with you on the beach and in the forest. I was so nervous about the big, scary tiger, but I'm very glad that you escaped just in time!
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work! :)